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Old 04-04-12, 09:01 PM   #1
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Post Gertie in Verse: So I Slapped It

The following was originally submitted by gertie here. I enjoyed it so much that I stripped it of its prose and reworked it into verse.


Bear in the Woods

She could so scare me
And I don't mean meeting
A bear in the woods
Scary
Downright scary
Not even a ghost
In the middle of the night
Scary

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Old 04-04-12, 09:03 PM   #2
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Re: Gertie in Verse: Bear in the Woods

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The following was originally submitted by gertie here. I enjoyed it so much that I stripped it of its prose and reworked it into verse.


She could so scare me
And I don't mean meeting
A bear in the woods
Scary
Downright scary
Not even a ghost
In the middle of the night
Scary
Wow. We need you on a guest spot on gertiepiece.
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Old 04-05-12, 08:23 AM   #3
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Re: Gertie in Verse: Bear in the Woods

Omg yes.
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Old 04-06-12, 03:27 AM   #4
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Post Gertie in Verse: Odd-looking Hangers

The following was originally submitted by gertie here. I liked it so much that I stripped it of its prose and reworked it into verse.


Odd-Looking Hangers

Yep
Don’t know why
I helped put my ex
Husband
Through vet school
I got to peel skin
Off dogs and cows
Horses were hung
From odd-looking hangers
The refrigerators had all
Kinds of animals
Waiting for the next
Phase
Even witnessed
Old Diamond (elephant)
Get necropsied
Weird

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Old 04-06-12, 03:36 AM   #5
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Re: Gertie in Verse: Odd-looking Hangers

Love these, Dizzle.

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Old 04-06-12, 03:39 AM   #6
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Re: Gertie in Verse: Odd-looking Hangers

Crandyman - that post is so old!

(and it's true)

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Old 04-06-12, 06:23 PM   #7
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Post Gertie in Verse: And English English

The following was originally submitted by gertie here. I liked it so much that I stripped it of its prose and reworked it into verse.


And English English

I do that too
But my head doesn’t sound
Like I sound
Sense?
I’ve been so many places
That things get mixed up
I’m a Southerner
But not
An Easterner
But not
An American
But not
I speak perfect German
And French
And English English
In my head
I know I speak perfect
American English
Just know it
Now tell me I’m scary
Or missing again?

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Old 04-07-12, 05:59 AM   #8
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Re: Gertie in Verse: And English English

The ad at the bottom of this post said, simply "Extremely Powerful and Incredibly Moving."

I agree.
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Sounds like beat poetry.
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Post Gertie in Verse: Funnier or Funnier

The following was originally submitted by gertie here. I liked it so much that I stripped it of its prose and reworked it into verse.



Funnier or Funnier

Is this,
Funnier or funnier?
Or funnier than that?

I think
My favorites to date
Would be
Crandymany
Or LostVluglag]]].

Actually,
You couldn't guess.

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